Writer's Block: It's Hard to Describe

[Error: unknown template qotd]I struggle most with getting an idea that I'm working on to flow descriptively throughout the whole story. Sometimes I feel like I'm not giving the reader enough detail to imagine the scene that is playing out in my head. Other than that, dialogue for characters seeming canon can be a major hang up occasionally. Especially when you're putting characters in awkward positions and trying to imagine their reactions and how to make it feel believable and reasonable to have happening in the first place.

Needle Scare

Mikey has pushed Ben too far when he uses a dirty needle to make a point, and Ben decides he needs to make a point of his own. Warning! This story contains non sexual disciplinary spanking!

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